Thursday, 8 November 2012
Like taps were left open in the skies I thought when I was an infant
To wet my cloak and see frogs crock were better than the lessons
To wet my strands and dirty my hands with muck were all my missions
To do it all and hide from god and parents…
Like taps were left open in the skies I thought when I was an infant
When I was 8 I learnt the fate of this empty world of treasons
Where the white mares and fairy tales were all superstitions
I knew in grief there were thieves, goons and killers outside prisons
Here lives a race which sees the face of brutal fate without a reason
When I was 8 I learnt the fate of this empty world of treasons
Today I stretch my arms and feel the breeze with moisty beads
With thunder and storms to make anyone squeak
I stride back to the thought of the world so screed of horrible deeds
Hands hold me, the handsome guy with a striking glee
And there he promises me to walk along until he breathes…
-Sainidhi Iyer
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This is elegant, I love how you've woven yourself into these words. I feel like I can see you writing them.
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Deletecarefully constructed; fine yes in terms of structure--but really again, it is the human experience that you always capture so well--way beyond your years. You have a gift--keep watering it! Tim Kavi
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DeleteLoved the poem. It's so beautiful! :)
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DeleteThis is less of a poem and more of a lyric.
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ReplyDeletevisualise a little girl holding her grandpa's hand ...how time flies...